英语作文写作方法指导(2)

　　→ Your son is old enough to look after himself now.

　　你的儿子已经长大，可以自己照顾自己了。

8. 尽量使句子带点“洋味”

　　(1) Don't worry. Be bold and try it, and you'll learn it soon.

　　→Don't worry. Just go for it, and you'll get it soon.

　　别担心，大胆试一试，你很快就会学会的。

　　(2) Thank you for playing with us.

　　→Thank you for sharing the time with us.

　　谢谢你陪我玩。

9. 综合使用各类所谓的“高级”结构

　　(1) Now everyone knows the news. I think Jim must have let it out.

　　→ Now everyone knows the news. I think it must have been Jim who has let it out.

　　现在人人都知道这消息了，我想一定是吉姆把它泄露出去的。

　　(2) We had to stand there to catch the offender.

 

　　→ What we had to do was (to) stand there, trying to catch the offender.

　　我们所能做的只是站在那儿，设法抓住违章者。

　　(3) If her pronunciation is not better than her teacher’s, it is at least as good as her teacher’s.

　　→ Her pronunciation is as good as, if not better than, her teacher’s.

　　如果她的语音不比她的老师好的话，至少也不会比她老师的差。

10. 适当使用名言警句点缀

　　在写作时根据实际情况恰当地用上一两句名言警句来点缀文章，不仅使文章显得有深度、有智慧，而且会让文章在评分中上一个“得分档次”。如：

　　(1) As the proverb says, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” Though you fail this time, you needn’t lose heart. As long as you work hard and stick to your dream, you will succeed one day.

　　(2) There is a proverb goes like this “Life isn’t a bed of roses.” It is ture that it is likely for everyone to meet problems and difficulties in life.

　　(3) In the modern world, more and more people live alone, which is not so good for our life. It is better for us to make more friends and enjoy friendship. Just as a proverb says, “A near friend is better than a far-dwelling kinsman.”